Organ could hav been better thought out (it sounds a bit annoying)
Thanks for the comment! I might re-render it with better instruments and samples some day.
nice could be better
That Drumset doesnt sound lik an X7 if something is over equalized it can make a mess out of things, run it through fl studio and use parametric EQ2 its really usefull
Actually, what happened was that we applied reverb. BIG MISTAKE. But we rolled it back and it sounds much better. Expect a redo soon.
Thanks for your review.
P.S.: How about critiquing the strings, EP and bass?
Im talking from a drummer point of view and I think that the drums could get a little more heavy around 00:36, use the crash, open hi hat, ride, double kick, anything thing to give it a heavier feeling that u usually here around the chorus
Personally, I am a drummer as well. I really did not notice that until now. The song was written with a basic drum beat, for me to tweak as I please. I have not really done that until now.
Thanks for the criticism. No sarcasm implied.
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i can just imagine the end of a final fantasy game, and everythings been fixed, so everyones going back home and you return as heroes
That's awesome. I can see it. Thanks for your review!
Not bad man this is real good stuff, but the only changing melody at the beggining was teh drums, and you cant get real melody out of them (i play them i kno) and your snare drum is the wrong choice u shulda used a more soft once
Yea i'm not a drummer, but i had no other choice :(
and thanks ill keep that in mind
Not bad.. but could be better
The singing really doesnt match the mood of this song, first of all it sounds like you hav no emotion theres only a one octave range of notes, and secondly it sounds like you took it on a very bad mic thats not saying that you hav to bye a 300 dollar mic, but you could always go to a recording studio or borrow a friends, somethings cant always be done without help
Lol, I'm not a singer, dude...
As for the recording quality, I'm not about to spend my studio time on a Newgrounds submission, so just deal with the rough edges.
That was amazing thank god rock hasnt died yet, the song is really cool but the bridge might hav sounded cool if you went from soft to loud, then you could really get a killer effect into ur chorus
Ow my ears
Hey man this definetly looks like the work of fl slayer, i think, anyway if it is pass it through fruity parametric eq 2, thatll really work wonders if u lower the higher pitch a little
thts abt all you would need to do, or use an acoustics guitar, it wouldnt hold the notes but the song could use a little more melody and you hold the same parts on and on too long
this is a remake of the third song ive ever made, all i did was change the instrument. but thanks for the tip, ill be using it on my other project. you were right i was useing fl slayer
You've got a unique style, touching lyrics, amazing use of instruments, but your singing sounds like its something totally different from a totally different song. You sound like you making a speech but you have to consider your voice as an instrument and imagine a melody for it that would fit in really well with all your other instruments props man 4/5
The songs pretty good but u made it sound lik a happy song, then instantly change the mood into an angry/revenge song. And the singing needs to fit in with the music a little more, it sounds like your talking.
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