Pretty Cool
Organ could hav been better thought out (it sounds a bit annoying)
Pretty Cool
Organ could hav been better thought out (it sounds a bit annoying)
Thanks for the comment! I might re-render it with better instruments and samples some day.
Pretty Amazing
Im talking from a drummer point of view and I think that the drums could get a little more heavy around 00:36, use the crash, open hi hat, ride, double kick, anything thing to give it a heavier feeling that u usually here around the chorus
Personally, I am a drummer as well. I really did not notice that until now. The song was written with a basic drum beat, for me to tweak as I please. I have not really done that until now.
Thanks for the criticism. No sarcasm implied.
Sweet
Not bad man this is real good stuff, but the only changing melody at the beggining was teh drums, and you cant get real melody out of them (i play them i kno) and your snare drum is the wrong choice u shulda used a more soft once
thanks man
Yea i'm not a drummer, but i had no other choice :(
and thanks ill keep that in mind
WOW
That was amazing thank god rock hasnt died yet, the song is really cool but the bridge might hav sounded cool if you went from soft to loud, then you could really get a killer effect into ur chorus
Ow my ears
Hey man this definetly looks like the work of fl slayer, i think, anyway if it is pass it through fruity parametric eq 2, thatll really work wonders if u lower the higher pitch a little
thts abt all you would need to do, or use an acoustics guitar, it wouldnt hold the notes but the song could use a little more melody and you hold the same parts on and on too long
this is a remake of the third song ive ever made, all i did was change the instrument. but thanks for the tip, ill be using it on my other project. you were right i was useing fl slayer
Interesting
You've got a unique style, touching lyrics, amazing use of instruments, but your singing sounds like its something totally different from a totally different song. You sound like you making a speech but you have to consider your voice as an instrument and imagine a melody for it that would fit in really well with all your other instruments props man 4/5
Not bad
The songs pretty good but u made it sound lik a happy song, then instantly change the mood into an angry/revenge song. And the singing needs to fit in with the music a little more, it sounds like your talking.
Amazing
Replying to LK412 u kan export from ur keyboard as a .mid (midi) file and open it on fl studio or somethn lik tht. Or u can create it on fl studio which is EXTREMLY tedious and long. by the way amazing song u got my 5/5
Thanks dude! Yeah, you can plug a midi keyboard into your computer and press the recording button and choose how to record.. this one was made in FL PianRoll. took me about 9 hours ors! thanks for the ten!
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