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That was O.K. first of all, you should have paid more attention to simple details lik the walk cycle, make it look realisitc by adding random steps. Secondly there should hav been some blood or some pain displayed, its almost as if the main guy is invincible there is no plot theres just mindless undetailed drawing. Flash can be a powerful tool if u can use it, so try to make the frame by frame more smoother itll work wonders trust me

not easy to score

try making the pins more sensitive

Pretty Cool

Organ could hav been better thought out (it sounds a bit annoying)

Pretty Amazing

Im talking from a drummer point of view and I think that the drums could get a little more heavy around 00:36, use the crash, open hi hat, ride, double kick, anything thing to give it a heavier feeling that u usually here around the chorus