That was O.K. first of all, you should have paid more attention to simple details lik the walk cycle, make it look realisitc by adding random steps. Secondly there should hav been some blood or some pain displayed, its almost as if the main guy is invincible there is no plot theres just mindless undetailed drawing. Flash can be a powerful tool if u can use it, so try to make the frame by frame more smoother itll work wonders trust me
not easy to score
try making the pins more sensitive
Organ could hav been better thought out (it sounds a bit annoying)
Thanks for the comment! I might re-render it with better instruments and samples some day.
nice could be better
That Drumset doesnt sound lik an X7 if something is over equalized it can make a mess out of things, run it through fl studio and use parametric EQ2 its really usefull
Actually, what happened was that we applied reverb. BIG MISTAKE. But we rolled it back and it sounds much better. Expect a redo soon.
Thanks for your review.
P.S.: How about critiquing the strings, EP and bass?
Im talking from a drummer point of view and I think that the drums could get a little more heavy around 00:36, use the crash, open hi hat, ride, double kick, anything thing to give it a heavier feeling that u usually here around the chorus
Personally, I am a drummer as well. I really did not notice that until now. The song was written with a basic drum beat, for me to tweak as I please. I have not really done that until now.
Thanks for the criticism. No sarcasm implied.
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